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11 June 2011 @ 07:40 pm
Forbidden flame  

Title: Forbidden Flame (Part 10)
Pairing: HanHae
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Donghae was just a plaything who was bought to please. And it's not even fun when he falls for the one who paid to keep him, who also vowed never to love.


Donghae’s chin wobbled, he thought he’d heard it wrongly—but the truth and sincerity in the other’s eyes were definitely unmistakable. He blinked desperately at the tears forming quickly in his depths.

“I love you Donghae.”

It was louder and firmer this time, and the younger man couldn’t hold it in anymore. His body trembled, his hands clenched tight in a fist, and he couldn’t seem to tear his eyes away from the other as their gazes locked.

Hangeng put a finger to the younger man’s chin, and leaned down to kiss the area where the tears touched Donghae’s cheeks. He found himself smiling—relieved at last that he finally wasn’t denying himself anymore. “Shh…” The elder bent lower at the waist and pressed his lips fully onto Donghae’s— cupping his face gently and carefully in his palms as if he would break.

The younger man sighed when he was suddenly enveloped in strong arms, legs coming automatically to wrap around the other’s waist. He couldn’t see but he had a rough idea where the elder was bringing him. He laid his head onto Hangeng’s shoulder as the other walked. He nuzzled the other’s neck and took in a deep breath. Donghae smiled at the familiar scent, so warm and cozy, it makes one want to snuggle in it.

His back touched soft mattress and he relaxed his hold on Hangeng. The taller man said nothing, just looked down deeply into his eyes and laid there, in between his legs. His eyes fluttered close when a hand lifted and trailed its fingers from his forehead down to his lips.

“So beautiful…”

Donghae opened his eyes at the remark from the other man. It was silence again that hung in the air, but it wasn’t uncomfortable or awkward. It’s that same little peace which Donghae loved, settling comfortably around them. He closed his eyes again as soft lips met his. “Nh…” He moaned when a tongue licked at the seam of his lips. It was erotic, the way tongue and tongue rubbed together, the taste of the elder was intoxicating—Donghae almost found himself sucked into another realm.

He didn’t know when his clothes were removed until he cried out when hot wet suction claimed his nipple. “Hng—“ He fisted his hand in Hangeng’s hair as he clutched his head tighter to him.

Hangeng moved higher and placed his mouth near to the neck. He blew softly and smirked when goose pimples broke out. “Always the sensitive one…” He made his point when a cry escaped Donghae when he sucked on his pulse. Nibbling on the skin there, he licked to further tease the other’s sensitivity before sucking on the same spot again— harder.

“Ah—“

Donghae’s legs came around then to lock the other’s waist to him. His arms hugged around Hangeng’s neck as the other sucked on his skin. The younger man knew what intention the other had and he gloried in the feel of it.

“Mine.” Hangeng declared against his ear after he released the suction on the younger man’s neck. He looked down proudly at his work and a half-lidded eyed Donghae. He thumbed the red mark on the skin, and leaned down to the man again. He gave a little peck on the lips before biting down on the fuller lower one. He smiled devilishly—and thrust a finger deep into the other’s ass.

“Aah!” Donghae arched his back at the sudden invasion at his tight hole. “Geng—“ He breathed out when the finger started thrusting in and out of him at a set pace.

“You’re sucking me in.” Hangeng added another finger, thrusting a few times before he inserted the third one in.

“Hahh—“

Donghae gripped tightly onto the other’s shoulders as pleasure blinded him. He thrust his hips in rhythm to the fingers moving in him.

“Is this okay?”

The younger man snapped his eyes open at the abrupt question. He almost rolled his eyes and moaned when another finger joined the rest. “Y—yes… Ah—“

“You just recovered. I don’t want to hurt you…” Hangeng slid his tongue along the underside of the other’s erection. The bittersweet taste of the fluid dribbling down the cock filled his senses and the elder felt like a drug addict craving for more.

Donghae arched and hardened further at the light touch. “You w—won’t hurt me.” He clenched his hands into tight fists in the silky sheets around them as light suction claimed the thick head of his erection.

Hangeng paused briefly, just so briefly, as he found more meaning behind the words than what it simply meant. He removed his fingers entirely from the tight ass, wrenching a cry of protest from the other. “What makes you think so?” He smeared the glimmering fluid on his hand over the other’s lips—smirking when a tongue came out immediately to lick away the musky concoction. “Hm?” Hangeng leaned down close and claimed Donghae’s lips. His hands roved over the younger man’s body, touching, caressing, memorising every little bumps and dents of the bony structure and the softness of the delicate creamy skin.

“—because you never did…” Donghae gasped out when a hand gripped his cock. “… You never will.” He made a surprised sound when he was suddenly lifted and put on all fours.

“Hangeng! What are you— Ugh—“

Hangeng licked tentatively at the puckered entrance—lapping at the pink wrinkled skin and smiling when he heard a groan. He massaged the twin round globes before spreading them wider—leaning closer to slide his tongue from the hole to the base of the other’s erection.

“Hangeng…” Donghae gripped the sheets and buried his face in them as he sobbed. He shut his eyes and gritted his teeth as he fought for control. His cock throbbed with fullness and threatened to spill. There was a chuckle and hands spread him wider from behind.

Donghae suddenly stiffened up and cried out when something wet and warm slid passed his tight entrance. “AH!” He arched his back and pushed his buttocks into the other’s face as Hangeng thrust his tongue in and out, mimicking a certain action. “Mmm…” The younger man bit his lip as pleasure vibrated through his body—he trembled and tried desperately to keep his body angled up. More. Donghae wanted more, but he doesn’t know what. “M—more, ah—Geng—“

Donghae gasped when a finger joined the tongue in the play. “Fuuuuuu—“ He breathed, and mentally forced his tongue to work. “I—I can’t take it anymore.” The younger man choked on his words when the tongue pushed in deeper and fingers worked faster. He let out a high pitched moan. “Take me Geng… Ta—” When the other man paid no heed to his words, that’s when his control snap. Donghae struggled in the other’s hold over his buttocks, and when he found out that he can never outdo Hangeng’s strength, he screamed. “FUCK ME!”

Hangeng smirked devilishly when the other snapped. He flipped Donghae onto his back and pinned his arms above his head. He rubbed their bare erections together, and had to bite back a moan when the other thrust his hips upwards to meet him in a deeper caress. “My lovely pet…” He whispered before crashing his lips onto the younger man’s, stopping any sounds coming forth as he slammed into him in one hard thrust.

“Hngggg—“ Donghae’s cry of pleasure was swallowed as tongue fought his, licking at each other, caressing and stroking. He gripped Hangeng’s soft hair and pulled on them in his frenzy, at the same time, bringing his head closer so that he could kiss him harder.

Hangeng threw the younger’s legs over his shoulders and got on his knees. He gripped the soft thighs and lifted the man so that only his upper back touched the mattress. “Hah—“ Donghae’s harsh breathing was music to his ears. He tightened his jaw as he thrust into the other over and over, grunting low and deep as the muscles around his cock gripped him so tight he almost couldn’t breathe.

“Touch yourself.” Hangeng growled out, his voice— a deep vibration as it travelled through Donghae’s spine and spread to every fiber in his body. He shuddered and complied, wrapping his hand tight around his own shaft and stroked in rhythm with Hangeng’s thrusts. “Ah—“

Hangeng watched as the younger man touched himself. He had never seen a more beautiful sight as the man before him, with his head thrown back, face contorted with pleasure, hair tousled and you just want to run your hands through that wild silky mess, eyes tightly shut, mouth hanging open with a thin shimmering trail that starts from the corner of his mouth, was milking his own erection as fluid dribbled onto his hands. The elder groaned and put two fingers into Donghae’s mouth—the other eagerly sucked on the digits and moaned when he tasted the saltiness on the elder’s skin.

Donghae was too caught up in his own pleasure as he began thrashing his head about—nearing his climax. “H—harder—hng—I’m coming Geng!”

“Come for me…” Hangeng narrowed his eyes, perspiration beaded on his forehead. “Come for me, baby.” He complied with the other’s command and began pounding wildly into the younger man. His own release was spiraling out of control as he watched the other’s expression. The muscles that gripped him were tight enough to break him in two. Hangeng angled the other’s hips and thrust hard.

“AHH—“

Donghae saw stars as heat spilled onto his hands. He felt his eyes roll back at the pleasure winding so tightly around his body. “Nh—“ The younger man gritted his teeth when Hangeng found his release. Heat coated his insides, filling him and leaking out as his muscles continued milking the other’s shaft.

Hangeng gently laid himself onto the younger man’s chest as they both panted. He turned his head slightly to kiss his nipple, smiling when the sensitive nub puckered up.

Heartbeats later, he supported himself on his elbows and looked down at the other man. Hangeng lifted a hand and brushed back the stray hairs at his temple. He smiled. “Donghae ah,” He caressed the cheeks faintly tinted with light pink. “Thank you.” The elder put a finger to the other’s lip before he could say anything. “Thank you for giving me this chance to love again.” He laughed lightly. “It sure feels good to be able to feel the butterflies fluttering in my stomach again.”

Donghae pursed his lip so that he kissed the finger that’s still placed over his lips. “I love you Hangeng.”

“… And I love you Donghae.”

And that was the first night that Donghae had sighed contentedly, and slept cuddled against a warm body. He kept that smile on his face and drifted off for he knows that from now onwards, he’ll never wake up finding himself alone and feeling empty ever again.

You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back.


END--

A/N: And this marks the end of Forbidden Flame's journey. Thank you for all your support and comments because like how I've always said it, your words meant a lot! ^^ I hope you guys enjoyed this as much as I've enjoyed writing it. (:

THANK YOU *gives HanHae hug*
 
 
Current Mood: happyhappy
 
 
FollowUrDestiny: Hanhae3followurdestiny on June 11th, 2011 11:59 am (UTC)
ahwww such a sweet ending and ... a wise lesson as well :)
ajfoaiwjefawef the rest was afjioej..hot XDDD... ohhh HanHae <333
summer0smilessummer0smiles on June 13th, 2011 01:13 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! *huggles*

^^
Jessica: HaeGengus_jessica on June 11th, 2011 01:27 pm (UTC)
Awww Hannie had the chance to love again because of Hae , OMG so sweet ...
I was losing my mind over that hotness and sexiness over there Summer , you're driving me crazy !!
Kinda sad to see this story ends , but it's a happy ending so I'm fine with it ...
I'm not sure if I made any sense now ,,, cuz I'm still in daze and drools like crazy fangirl becuz of HanHae ;)
love you summer *group hugs with HanHae*
summer0smilessummer0smiles on June 13th, 2011 01:16 am (UTC)
The Han and the Hae are the sweetest! Not my fault!! XDD Thank you~ I'm glad you liked this. And thank you for your support!! Love you~ *huggles*
sjh20sjh20 on June 11th, 2011 02:11 pm (UTC)
im SOOOOOOO in love with is fic
Hanni so gentle Hae so cute
thanks for the update
i cant wait to see your next fic hehe~
*HanHae hugs* i lke this hug lolz
summer0smilessummer0smiles on June 13th, 2011 01:16 am (UTC)
THANK YOU! ^^ *huggles*
dhgaldhgal on June 11th, 2011 03:12 pm (UTC)
Oooh... What better way to end it than Hanhae smut?
Bwahahahaha... Good Job sweetie <3
summer0smilessummer0smiles on June 13th, 2011 01:17 am (UTC)
Hehehe~ Awww, thank you~~ *huggles*
Taffy "Miracle Shining" Anderson: Kissmiracleshining on June 11th, 2011 03:25 pm (UTC)
What a rollercoaster ride and what a beautiful, sexy and lovely way to end the storyline! Congratulations, it was fantastic! Continue to write HanHae Baby, you're great at it!
summer0smilessummer0smiles on June 13th, 2011 01:18 am (UTC)
Indeed... And thank you so much for following this storyline. You're my favourite HanHae author, so getting such praises from you really meant a lot to me. (: THANK YOU *huggles*
melodyprower11melodyprower11 on June 11th, 2011 04:40 pm (UTC)
*squeals* I love your HsnHae <33333333

OMG SERIOUSLY, this is awesome and amazing, and i love it! <3

Hannie! Finally you really truely give in and realize it! you loooove him! you love him!

and Donghae is so happy and gah! My baby! I'm so happy when he's hppy lol~

and the end~ so sexy~ kekeke~ *smirks*

Way to go summer! Saranghaaaaaaeeeeeee <33333
summer0smilessummer0smiles on June 13th, 2011 02:54 am (UTC)
*Clings* THANK YOU!! Thank you so much for supporting me throughout on this. Hehehe~ You're the best! <333333333
kaiyasaratokaiyasarato on June 11th, 2011 07:39 pm (UTC)
*steals the HanHae and runs in circles squealing in happiness!!!*

Sorry that's the only coherent thing I could get out........
summer0smilessummer0smiles on June 13th, 2011 02:55 am (UTC)
*runs in circles with you* THANK YOU! ^^
kaiyasaratokaiyasarato on June 15th, 2011 01:28 am (UTC)
Oh no no no no. Thank YOU!!! *huggles*
rinda_sjfishyrinda_sjfishy on June 12th, 2011 05:53 am (UTC)
awwwwwwwwwwww finally....
hannie confessed and hae cried like that...sweeeeeeeeeet ><
and the smut is sooooooo hot unnieeeeeeeeeeeee...really soooo sweet and hot at the same time...
and the cuddling session at the end is so warm...hanhae must be the happiest and luckiest person rite now..hehehehehehehe
thank you unnieeeeeeeeeee, live this series very muuuuuucccchh....though its kinda sad that this forbidden flame has been ended..
waiting for your next unnieeeeeeee....hwaiting!! love yaaaaaa ^.~
summer0smilessummer0smiles on June 13th, 2011 02:56 am (UTC)
Aww, THANK YOU SWEETIE! ^^ Thank you so much for your support.
rinda_sjfishyrinda_sjfishy on June 13th, 2011 03:38 am (UTC)
hehehehehe you are very welcome Summer unnieeeeee.. *hugs ♥
brattyhun: puppygunhaeree on June 12th, 2011 10:58 am (UTC)
AND THEY LIFE HAPPILY EVER AFTERRRRR, :DDDD

*ISSOHAPPY*

Ugh finally *sigh in relief*

Thank u for this...
I love this fic so much ^^
summer0smilessummer0smiles on June 13th, 2011 02:56 am (UTC)
XDDDD THANK YOU! *huggles*
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summer0smilessummer0smiles on June 13th, 2011 02:57 am (UTC)
Aww, thank you~ ^^
catherine_leitecatherine_leite on June 13th, 2011 04:14 pm (UTC)
a great way to end up one great, as you said, journey.

very very VERY hot smut. >////< *goes nosebleeding,like, forever*

it's one epic ending!! Approved!
summer0smilessummer0smiles on June 14th, 2011 02:47 am (UTC)
Hehehe~ I'm so glad you liked the smut! XD Thank you so much for your support!
haechronicsdizzchan on June 14th, 2011 05:49 am (UTC)
Ohmy!!! Why I found out this awesome fic now.... Fail!me
Oh goooddddd!!!!! I love how patiently has waiting for haniie to realized his feeling....
And yeah he deserve hannie's heart after going through all of that...
Huwaaaaaaaaaaa!!! Their smutty moment is the best....
Thankyuuu Thankyuuu for this... >.<
sorry for the late comments.......
♪(*^^)o∀*∀o(^^*)♪
summer0smilessummer0smiles on June 14th, 2011 11:29 pm (UTC)
Don't worry, you're not like gazillion of years late. I just posted this up. (: I'm glad you liked this and thank you! ^^
jarield: HanHaejarield on June 17th, 2011 11:07 am (UTC)
If you are wondering... Yes I died, and just get resurrected just now... HAHA!!!

And what an amazing treat for my Resurrection... Oh my gaud!!! I'm getting major nosebleeds... My blood! My blood!

*dies*

....
....
....

*resurrects*

Okay, I'm okay now... Boo You Whore! I just got another Resurrection because of you!!!

Ooohhh!! Who would have thought that the moment you chose to write a long multi-chaptered fic that it will be somewhat like this? I didn't... When you first posted the first part, I thought it will only be like two or three shots... Then, wow, you made it to 10 chapters...

Anyways... I'm very much pleased with the whole story...

You wrote the smut in a way kind of artful and erotic just the way I like... It can be pornish and slutty, specially the first parts... But maybe I could live with that... Anyhow, I wanted to see how the story progresses despite having porn at every update... So yeah, I stayed in waiting for the updates...

And I can't help it! Donghae is just miserable adorable and Hannie... I love sexy badass Hannie... And his protective and caring side showed anyway...

I love how Hannie loosen up to Donghae and give in as to Hae being miserably waiting for Han Geng, loving him...

Cookies for you...
summer0smilessummer0smiles on June 17th, 2011 12:47 pm (UTC)
*tries desperately to stop your nosebleed*

Oh really? Resurrection success? GREAT, then I don't have to bring out my defibrillator! XDD

Hm, actually I never thought this would be 10 chapters long either! Lol. It was supposed to be a oneshot, but I thought 'hey, maybe I could add a little more to my first part and let it become a twoshot.'........... Then after the second part was finished I thought 'you know what? I think I want to play a little more around with the characters.' LOL XD

Oh I'm GLAD you liked the smut? Hah, I was kinda afraid you guys would get sick of it, like this story would be all sex and nothing else.. so yeah, I'm happy it all turned out well. (:

I've always wanted to read a submissive Hae and dominant Geng but I can't seem to find them anywhere... and I simply just LOVE that relationship between the two of them. I love to see Hae pinning for Geng's love and still love him no matter how sick in the mind Geng can be. Ahhh, maybe I'm just weird like that. XD

*eagerly takes cookies* Thank you! (: